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Mr Chaffe wrote:
Write me an interesting fact about Queen Victoria including correct use of the subordinating conjunction of 'although'.
Ade 5F wrote:
Although Queen Victoria was royal, she still lived as a lonely single child when she was young.
Ashmaan wrote:
Although we know she wanted to be the longest reigning queen,some thought she should of gave up her throne;others thought she had a great idea of staying on the throne until death
Hope you like this one sir 😄
Mr Chaffe wrote:
Great try Ashmaan but linking those two types of sentence doesn't quite work. You could have had:
Although we know Victoria wanted to be the longest reigning queen, some people at the time though she should have given up her throne. In contrast, others agreed with her and thought it was a great idea to stay on the throne until death.
Fatema wrote:
Although Queen Victoria was small (1.5m), she was a big strong leader.
Ade 5F wrote:
Although Queen Victoria became Queen when she was only 18 years old, she didn't take it for granted and was very serious about it and in the end she was remembered of being the second longest reigning British monarch.
Lillie 5F wrote:
Although Queen Victoria and her mother lived in a palace, they weren't rich.
Richmond wrote:
although Queen Victoria was strong because she was a Queen, she became queen at 18 years she was havin a husband called king albert.
Can you use a fronted adverbial to add further description to a sentence? Any sentence is fine but if you are struggling for ideas, why not use this one:
Jim Jarvis staggered down the cobbled street.
Ade 5F wrote:
Outside the house, there were lots young children playing basketball.
In the distance, there was a call of help from a man who was in the middle of the blue ocean.
Far away, there was an old man who used to live in a cottage with his dog.
Mr Chaffe wrote:
Great work Ade! Let's see if anyone can match your effort.
Oliver 5P wrote:
Weak and exhausted, Jim Jarvis staggered down the cobbled street.
Lillie 5F wrote:
As we walked slowly down the street, I could see that the streets were getting cleaner.